Tuesday, August 11, 2015

There Once Was A Bird In The Sky Comments

Rating: 4.3

There once was a bird in the sky
Who thought it was easy to fly!
But the bird flew too low
And flew into a pole
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Elisabeth Wingle
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Bri Edwards 24 August 2017

I STILL LIKE IT. AND in case i didn't do it already, .........to MyPoemList it gooooooeessssss. bri :)

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Khairul Ahsan 10 July 2016

Wow, wonderful limerick!

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Bri Edwards 25 February 2016

wes beat me to the 'edit'. :) an easy mistake, easily corrected. otherwise, the poem is peachy keen, except for what happened to the bird. i 'love' birds. must have been one of the stupid ones! bri :)

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Wes Vogler 07 January 2016

Hey silly typo line 3 to/too It is nice to run into a natural limerick writer. give us more I figured out why some ratings don't get through they bring up the ratings list, select a number and forget to VOTE incidentally using the same word twice in rhyming is a time honoured Lear tradition, but you should try to avoid it..

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Elisabeth Wingle 07 January 2016

Thanks for the edit. And advice

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Pamela Sinicrope 03 November 2015

I love limericks! They stick in your head for a lifetime!

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Dr Antony Theodore 08 October 2015

nice little poem with a wonderful note of wisdom. nothing is easy in this life. we have to struggle hard and think and plan to get to the top in life. thank you for this message.

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Kelly Kurt 12 August 2015

A fun limerick, Elisabeth

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Elisabeth Wingle

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