Wednesday, January 9, 2008

There Lived A Man Comments

Rating: 3.6

Sometime before my time,
There lived a man...
Full of adventure,
Who traveled the land.
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Scarlett Treat
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Ernestine Northover 10 January 2008

Those itchy feet of one who travels and never settles down. Lovely reminisciences here Scarlett, and a delight to read. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 09 January 2008

........C O N G R A T U L A T I O N S... S W E E T...S C A R L E T T........ O N /////////////////////////////////////...2 0 0...P O E M S ///////////////////////////////////// ...................MAY YOU PEN 200 MORE IN SHORT ORDER! ................... ................................................~ F j R ~................................................

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 09 January 2008

Sweet Scarlett...you do indeed know how to weave simple words into a capturing story...a true story, in this case...Excellent work, young lady, and as Tom M. put it: Because of him...there is Y O U...so, Mason Dixon Line or not....i like this man! FjR

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Tom J. Mariani 09 January 2008

You left us guessing if he was off to the war again and did not return, or if he just ran out on her. Either way, it broke her heart but started a blood-line that led to you. Life was more difficult back then for both men, women and children. I tried to convey this in my poem 'It May Not Seem Fair.' You have told us just enough to make another one of your great peoms. Tom

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This is the most touching piece I have read today. Thank you. t x

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