The continuous noise of a rock being struck,
Multiplying hundreds of times.
The pick on stone, like the hammer that strikes,
on a clock that forever chimes.
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You have created such a deplorable scene with this strong and descriptive poem Ernestine. My heart goes out to the slaves for the torture they endured, and gratefully so to you for making me aware of such cruelty. 10 love Karin
Your well chosen words paint a strong image of courage. I am shamed and thankful for my comfort and safety. Excellent write.10+ Kind regards Ann
I think the title of this excellent piece is so apt, well said Ernestine, 10 Lynda xx
Yes we should never forget the suffering and hardship that the slaves endured. Great write Ernestine, I adore this type of poetry. Love, Andrew xx
An indictment on our history forever Ernestine and your verse cries out in the cause of the poor victims....10 + + + Fay.
Very strong images here Ernestine.A stain and indeed a dark shadow on history. Sid.