There Lies A Devil In Me Comments

We all go through this emotional outburst.. very beautifully expressed Musawir.

nicely framed poem, nice concept too, why do u emphasis ur rhymes by writing them in bold?

I get the anger vividly and can almost hear the words spoken, a lot of pain within, so much darkness and such a lot of energy lost through this anger...Good poem.....

awesome...love the way u choose ur words

Anger in words pictoriously written and personified in the form of the devil. very nice write. tony

A very powerful poem, expressing your inner anger. The use of capitalization is probably not needed at the end of each line though. Thanks, Musawir

Very well written, poignant and very intense! It is very frustrating when someone borrows money and doesn't repay it. Great job of portraying your feelings and frustration! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

You ignored objection CEASELESSLY You did corruption AIMLESSLY You raised the tension INTENSELY Now both of us would be FREE Because, there lies a devil in ME......very intense write..liked much

A very impressive poem, yes, we all have a devil inside us.