Saturday, June 11, 2011

There Is One Catch Comments

Rating: 4.5

To vent obscenities,
Seems today to be in vogue.
And just yesterday,
My expressed embitteredness...
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 11 June 2011

It was marvellous. Great sentiments are running across the poem. The poem has plenty of depth and wisdom. Great stuff indeed.10/10. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1.

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Ace Of Black Hearts 11 June 2011

Hmm, Are your describing something you wrote that wasn't seen as valid before, but now is okay because they are upset? A hypocrite indeed is one that use reasoning To break the rules they put in place. A change of season ones starts preaching With what distaste do we erase? That's a question indeed. Thanks for the poem, as always you get the wheel spinning..

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