Starved and famished,
I looked up to him
morsels of consolation
he offered me…
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Yes! This is what poetry demands, although you have narrated a simple story, yet you have painted the deep feelings of lost passion and untouched dream.......nice!
Yes this is what poetry demands! Altough you have narrated a simple story, yet you have painted the deepest passion of untouched dreams drawing your words from the deep feelings with a literary touch.