Friday, December 16, 2016

There Is Love In This House! Comments

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The house, I said to myself, for I felt it
Though I saw no writing and heard no whisper;
But the husband was walking confidently with a swag,
And the good wife was singing softly out of tune;
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Aisha Masha
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Dr Antony Theodore 22 December 2016

Two pinches on her buttocks made her jump into his arms. There is love in this house! walking into each other's arms....... taking in and describing the simple delicacies of life and from there coming to the conclusion there is love is a fine way of writing heart touching poetry. thank you dear poetess.

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Faith Maina 19 December 2016

A house become a happy home with happy love! This is a good poem!

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Linet Sabastian 16 December 2016

I love the simplicity and smooth flow of this poem. Keep up.

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Rose Kanana 16 December 2016

Such a lovely poem Aisha there is sure love in the house...simple one for them.

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Juliki Katana 16 December 2016

That house is good with all the love flowing there! Poem that show what life should be.

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