Wednesday, May 4, 2016

There Is Fire In Your Mind Comments

Rating: 4.4

Among the hearts of gold
Or the sand one that you hold
I wont be fooled by the shine
I still bound to thine
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Unwritten Soul
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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 May 2018

The golden hearts wont buy me But the sand one is truly lively Because when i cried on yours The sand take all and I let it be green eternaly' I'll let the flower grows on you...haunting expression with nice theme. A beautiful poem shared startlingly. Thanks for sharing.10

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Susan Williams 15 March 2018

There is such a unique style to your poetry- -your lines intrigue the reader, they must read on- - your meaning is a complex one except there are varied and multiple layers to the meaning and we must delve deeper with you and it is worth the time spent thinking and pondering. Most excellent poem and it delivers depths not shallows.

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Mj Lemon 15 June 2017

The truth and falsehood can share that common property.....the ability to burn through circumstances. They are like acid to copper. Yet the ultimate effect that each brings is radically different. Very thought provoking, Soul.

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Unwritten Soul 15 June 2017

To understand it takes more steps before conclude something, senses can be fooled but we cant if we know the truth...I like your words, like acid to cooper...wonderful thing to imagine dear.

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 August 2016

It burns my skin! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Abduhoo Salamath 14 August 2016

The golden hearts wont buy me But the sand one is truly lively Because when i cried on yours The sand take all and I let it be green eternaly' wooow, .... great

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Muhammad Ali 05 August 2016

this poem is different. and it is a beauty by its structure and theme. nice to read

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Hans Vr 03 June 2016

Beautiful, touching Tears on sand growing flowers. The image is so special. Honesty above all. Love this poem, Soul. Fantastic art, superb poetry.

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Mihaela Pirjol 03 June 2016

When heats are filled with love, it can only be truth that exists. Of course, when experiencing romantic love, the emotional intensity may not allow the truth to be spoken openly, yet, it is only truth that governs the hearts in love. A great poem.

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M Asim Nehal 27 May 2016

Outstanding poem The golden hearts wont buy me But the sand one is truly lively Because when i cried on yours The sand take all and I let it be green eternaly'

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Lyn Paul 22 May 2016

True friends rise above romance as romance is not always true. Wonderful that you are not fooled by the shine yet we have to trust too. Beautiful words as always thank you for the notes too.

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Unwritten Soul 24 May 2016

Thank you Lyn, its been a while not hear anything from you... hope you always fine there.... And about the poem...Sometimes we rather try to understand than judge...because judging friends and people without understand may lead us to false understanding.. see u again :)

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* Sunprincess * 15 May 2016

..........this is beautiful soul, I love your thoughts on honesty.... honesty is the foundation of all true relationships ★

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Unwritten Soul 24 May 2016

Thats right sunprincess...it always true

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Kelly Kurt 09 May 2016

Deep thoughts. I agree, honesty, even if it is painful, is the heart of friendship

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Chan Mongol 07 May 2016

Number ten goes for such high thoughts. The Poet expressed well with his powerful words. Thanks for sharing.

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Untamed Heart 04 May 2016

true! very well written.

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