There Is A Poem To Write Comments

There's only one stanza and no rhyming seems present, no humor, nor , no exciting violence, nor alliterations, but STILL I give it five stars. bri ;)

Julia, Today I see a comment you sent me 3 years ago to 'Mashed Potatoes'. Thanks. This poem from you [one of life's 'RESPONSIBILITIES'] rings a bell in my brain. At my age, my responsibilites are less: actually I'm dead now. bri ;)

We are just existing here. We have to take on our responsibilities. Nicely written poem here Julia.

A fine finish to a eloquent piece ful of thoughtfulness. Thanks for sharing Commenting on my poem

Your super ego is your mother somehow becoming you. Life is just chronic. You can't take a break. then comes the peace and rest and a poem is born. how true.. we are all experiencing it in our lives. thank u dear poetess. tony

Your super ego is your mother somehow becoming you/// superb writings

What a terrible shame that we can't stop, take stock and listen the planets heart beat from time to time. It slows the pulse, relaxes the mind, allows us to taste the air. This poem brought to mind all that, so thank you.

thank you for reading and responding!

Life is just chronic.......wonderful poem. Thank u.anjandev roy.

And when there is not/there is a poem to write..............expression directly touches my heart! Extremely well penned....10

When we do Yoga or meditation, we leave behind all the mundane routine things to be done. The list of to be done never ends in life. In order to enjoy life, do not shoulder too many responsibilities. Just drop them for a while. And write a lovely poem! That sounds lovely, isn't it Julia? ........10

I like writing a poem better than killing a fly, but I have to confess having done both. I enjoyed your poem very much. Real good touch, makes its point, without overdoing it or unnecessary, much. Good work, keep it up.

Habits make us like rabbits eating grass. Nibblers of fact we stay intact.