Sunday, November 16, 2008

There Is A Pain In My Heart...... Comments

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Somewhere in my heart, there is a buried pain
Can not be shown to anyone whoever even cares for me
I keep my feelings under wraps without showing my tears
With whom I can share my pain and ease my suffering
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Ravi Sathasivam
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Chitra - 18 November 2008

a heart stirring write, this abyss of pain is something that all of us dread may god give us the strength to overcome it

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Anjali Sinha 17 November 2008

yes Ravi there is some deep pain in your heart which u try to forget but it surfaces try and keep cool things will ease out nice write-shows the depth of your feelings ++10 anju

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Trinity K 17 November 2008

keep my feelings under wraps without showing my tears With whom I can share my pain and ease my suffering No one in this world will know what has stored deep in my heart ..... wonder of wonders... that we still live...! ! ! ! A++

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Seema Chowdhury 16 November 2008

very nice and touchy poem. feels like the poet has experienced some pain and his wounded heart is writing these lines. i hope and pray may your heart find peace and solace in this time of crisis for you.

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