Mirtha Michelle Castro Marmol

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Tuesday, August 13, 2013

There, I Still Will Be. Comments

Rating: ★4.5

I gave you the sun
But you wanted the moon.
When I gave you the moon,
You wanted the stars.
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Mirtha Michelle Castro Marmol

moon

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Adeline Foster 19 August 2013

Your Note was as enlightening as the poem. Try mine - O Dearest Love - Adeline

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Patti Masterman 14 August 2013

I like the little tale inside the poem; it takes a complex mind to be able to write something like this with simplicity and ease like you did here and convey the clever idea that's behind the poetry.

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