Tuesday, March 13, 2012

There Be, There Be Comments

Rating: 5.0

The shimmer of the morning cold
seemed to stroke its fingers across
my late morning dream.
You turned towards me,
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Ross Mackay
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Kasia Fedyk 18 May 2012

Exceptional, fantastic, breathtaking. I love the sensuality in this one Ross, the transformation of the soul, reflection, mirror, merging with another, maybe a dream, maybe a tear, its vivid and real, pure genius, this is what I feel through this poem, what a journey and I love it! ! ! ! ! Thank you Ross! ! !

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Jennifer Cramer 16 April 2012

I really like the image this poem creates. Its beautiful.

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Linda Maree 13 March 2012

beautiful use of words

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