Yes, there are times
We may say lots of things
There are times
We may do lots of things
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i guess my good PH friend, Valsa, thinks of me as a zero (see her comment below) . too bad. i'll have to ask her about that! bri : (
I'M glad you had time to write this one; it is the favorite of mine of the three i read tonight. this one definitely will go into my/our July showcase of poems/poets on my PH site. i liked the repetition of phrases. i liked that it made sense. i could understand it well. it rolled along smoothly. bri :)
With just a hope of being found Even quite safe and sound Yes, there are times To say enough is enough ...... yes, there are times to do something good, something to find and to have sound life. Nicely and aptly presented. Enjoyed.
So..... in the ripe moment you have written this poem and I am very much inspired! I too firmly believe in 'With God man is a hero, without Him, he is a zero'!
Endurance! Facing the troubles of life. Nice work.