At hot noon in a summer season,
I used to be out with a reason,
Troops of boy, all elder to me,
In an orchard, with them, I used to be,
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''yet. i remember it with pretty good '' very nice poem with nice rhyme, the first stanza is a sweet piece with marvellous flow with lovely diction and style..i see in you a great prospect in the field of poetry..
A nice taste of childhood and a very clear message. beautifully written with strong skill
Seeing the world through a child's eye. Well conceived and skillfully written.
10 out of 10 for this lovely poem about childhood. I enjoyed reading it.
All of them have different traits. Along with courage and craze, patience is too required sometimes. You have composed a nice poem here.
Joyful remembrance providing philosophy of life - take personal risk to achieve a goal. Nice. Thank you.