Tuesday, April 16, 2013

There Are Three Kinds Of People Comments

Rating: 5.0

At hot noon in a summer season,
I used to be out with a reason,
Troops of boy, all elder to me,
In an orchard, with them, I used to be,
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Aftab Alam
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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 24 June 2013

Joyful remembrance providing philosophy of life - take personal risk to achieve a goal. Nice. Thank you.

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Wahab Abdul 02 May 2013

''yet. i remember it with pretty good '' very nice poem with nice rhyme, the first stanza is a sweet piece with marvellous flow with lovely diction and style..i see in you a great prospect in the field of poetry..

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Tamara Puyear 27 April 2013

A nice taste of childhood and a very clear message. beautifully written with strong skill

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Buxton Shippy 22 April 2013

Seeing the world through a child's eye. Well conceived and skillfully written.

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David Wood 20 April 2013

10 out of 10 for this lovely poem about childhood. I enjoyed reading it.

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Sd Tiwari 19 April 2013

All of them have different traits. Along with courage and craze, patience is too required sometimes. You have composed a nice poem here.

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Ruby Mostazir 16 April 2013

nice poem wid a nice thoughts indeed

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Gajanan Mishra 16 April 2013

Always with him who climb up. very good Aftab.

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