Sunday, August 7, 2011

There Are Moments Comments

Rating: 4.8

There are moments
In the reservoir of life
When the hours become twisted
And slowly drown in infinity.
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Romeo Della Valle
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Devon McElveen 18 August 2011

Incredible. This is the type of poetry I aspire to write. If there was such thing, I would rate this a 100.

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Julia Miller 10 August 2011

truly beautiful :) something many can relate to

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Louis Cecile 10 August 2011

Very poignant piece. I like the use of repetition and the spiral effect of the concept of the poem. Good metaphors and excellent work.

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Macanthony Chijioke Nwatu 09 August 2011

wonderful! wonderful! its didactic.

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Elizabeth Grace 08 August 2011

Thank you for writing. Your words are a gift.

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isatou Juwara 08 August 2011

sometimes in moments of despair and hard times, its the faith that makes you stronger, and hope as you said, becomes your friend.......beautiful poem! !

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Romeo Della Valle

Romeo Della Valle

Dominican Republic
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