Wednesday, May 28, 2008

There Are A Lot Of Things That Make Me Me! Comments

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There are a lot of things that make me me!
I look different in a way to everyone around me,
If only they could see how special I can be.
Some are sensitive or kind,
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Abster Benci
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MKG F 29 May 2008

hi abbie! =) my gosh, you're only twelve and yet you express yourself excellently! keep it up my dear! I love they way you expressed yourself here...celebrate your uniqueness...and make a positive difference in this world! =) I gave you 10 for this dear! =)

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Holly Elizabeth 29 May 2008

yes, good poem abbie. yes everyone is indavidual and they should be themsleves and not try an be other people. i think this is a good poem. i give you 10 =)

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Lynda Robson 29 May 2008

Nice poem Abby, all we can really do is be ourselves,10 for this, Lynda

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Viola Grey 28 May 2008

being ourselves is all we can ever really be...nice work

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Evaughn Gray 28 May 2008

yes just as POEWHIT says..be yourself, and don't let anyone change that..really great poem, i loved it..~Hazel

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Joseph Poewhit 28 May 2008

True one must shed the illusions of ones self

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