Saturday, February 6, 2016

There And Not There Comments

Rating: 4.0

There's night, there's day
And there's the emptiness in between
There's an insatiable hunger
That cuts into the soul
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Nosheen Irfan
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Muhammad Ali 20 August 2016

as much nice as much it is filled with sadness. sometimes I feel we all live whole day and all nights in that way

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Valsa George 12 February 2016

I toil through the day's madness I suffer through the night's eternity My wounds burst open each day Love hurts and it hurts deeply.............. I strongly feel the pangs of love.... when it drifted apart to a distance too far! Another gripping write!

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Abhilasha Bhatt 08 February 2016

Increment of pain in every screen.....Beautiful poem....loved it....thank you for sharing :)

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Aarzoo Mehek 07 February 2016

I know how it feels... Can feel every word, every scream and the emptiness within. Nosheen When I read your poems, I see a part of me in you.. My soul friend your writings speaks loud and clear.10 plus plus plus..

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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