Friday, January 23, 2009

There And Back Comments

Rating: 5.0

where's my sunshine gone to?
where's my ray of hope?
where's the help i need now
as i dangle on this rope?
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amber roser
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Edward Kofi Louis 24 March 2016

Where is my sunshine gone to? Thanks for sharing.

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Dave Walker 24 September 2011

Really like this. True emotion. Good poem.

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Elena Sandu 28 June 2011

Well written I can feel raw pain, please don't rely on someone to bring you light, your own heart is a glowing globe, open it and look around, watch the sky and you'll find your smiles again. Thank you for share,10

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Dragon Wizard 15 October 2009

I submerged in between lines, I loved what I saw... Read ' A slice of a life´s instant' I dedicated it to you, in response to this poem... Warm Regards, Dragon Wizard

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Ian Bowen 23 January 2009

Amber, enjoyabe piece. Ian

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