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Tides and tidal waves always happening in sea particularly near the shore and often damages and ruins the land itself. But it have a wonderful scenic beauty reminding us the plight of nature and life itself where tides are coming and going and ultimately perishing in oblivion a real event in the nature. good poetry.

Those tides are in haste A part of the shore Desire surge to depths Tides come and go but the shore remains at its place.

This is a wonderful piece penned very intelligently comparing desires of life with tides of sea.....well-deserved 10/10

A poem that compares the tide of the sea with the desire of life - Whole poem stood here with its superb symbolism First line of each stanza more or less anapest in nature that gives a haste or movement- Thank you Salini very nice p[poem you composed=- worth to read - 10

There may sink my prejudice Vigor may lift its surges....................................................i have seen such an incomparable description of the sea...........i am greatly fascinated.................there is a lot to learn from your poem.......................great...........thanks