Thursday, July 10, 2008

Then The Day Goes By! Comments

Rating: 2.0

The morning was sharp and glomming
With the misty cloud of the night
Chased away by the clave of lighten.
The dew has atom on the grasses
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Godspower Oshodin
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Adeline Foster 18 June 2009

I do not know why you have received such a low vote on this poem. True, it has a Lewis Carroll type of Jabberwocky spelling and flavor. So what, did not he become famous for just such manipulation of word forms? I have enjoyed this. Adeline

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