Then One Day Comments

Well expressed thoughts on mortality, with fine imagery.

A well composed piece. Simply impressive.....10++

A poem with a philosophical undertone. It makes one think about life and death. Thanks.

A deeply poignant short write. In life, death is inevitable. We will depart with nothing. Very touching and well conveyed.

Living! ! Being active! ! ! But one day, No more! ! ! ! ! Life and death. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

One day, perhaps you won't find me smiling Or I w'd see someone to smile... Very grave situation! Stay safe.

Words of life and death true. Good words. I feel a rhyming last line will add more glaze to your eminent piece if you can try that.