Friday, August 23, 2013

Then - Now! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Once,
I saw rainbows
across the tear washed sky,
their iridescent gleam
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Valsa George
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Vaibhav Simha 29 April 2020

Certain things are not valued until their dearth plagues us. As always, the nature evinced in the poetry is intricate and beautiful. I like how you always associate " amber" with " gold" , and the way you began the poem.

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Akhtar Jawad 24 August 2017

I realize with a jolt, how much I have missed and how much more I will miss! Forget what you have missed hold fast what you have got. A beautiful poem.

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Patricia Grantham 05 September 2013

Let us all try to enjoy the simple things in life. For when we do this that is when we experience true joy. The setting of the Sun, a rainbow in the sky, trees shedding their leaves, birds flying all around, waves lapping at the seashore. So many things to relax and dwell upon. Even reminiscing about the past and telling stories of events that happened that is still etched within our minds. Live the life you love, love the life you live. An excellent write.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 02 September 2013

Then -Now- a wonderful presentation of the days gone by and the present situation. That you are able to recall the old shows they are still imprinted in your mind but you feel for the freshness gone, perhaps.A FABULOUS WRITE, VALSA!

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Kee Thampi 31 August 2013

very nice and to be bear with a misty feel

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Om Chawla 28 August 2013

Very well written, nostalgic as Mr. Dinesh views it. Some forty years ago I also wrote a poem with same title, but how different was my perspective on what I saw. You may like to see.

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Dinesan Madathil 27 August 2013

First of all let me 'confess' that I saw a rainbow just one week ago! I forgot to close my eyes even! Let us rejoice at the glory of the past and live like this in perpetual recollections.. Probably a few more are still around us not missing the essence of the life of the kind.. Nostalgia reincarnate again! Madam Valsa, kudos to you for the brilliant coherence of images invited.

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Heather Wilkins 25 August 2013

life is ever changing good verse bad up verse down that is life a good read

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 24 August 2013

Mistakes or correction and repentance is the theme so it is a call we should not miss the beauty of the world and our own beauty lovely write

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 24 August 2013

Mistakes or correction and repentance is the theme so it is a call we should not miss the beauty of the world and our own beauty lovely write

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Geetha Jayakumar 24 August 2013

Beautiful poem. Life remind us of the beauties we missed in our life.....Each sentence beautifully portrayed..Loved reading it.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 24 August 2013

Life is not the same always. It keeps changing. Responsibilities and burdens of life take their toll. Age keeps adding up. What was bright then is now dim. Changes nicely expressed in the beautiful poem. Thank you.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 24 August 2013

a reminder to all those who haste and miss the beauties scattered around!

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