All it took was a cast
As the spirit flowed
And all was left is the past
As memories were just a load
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Superb piece of art man, your brushes did wonders here....yes it took those people to instil in us this impetus, they lit that flame that will burn on after we are long gone...your legacy will live forever in the minds of millions across the globe and books in libraries...thanks for making me feel special, just for a day..
You are a very decent poet.You're expressing your values through your poems.
With poems like this you will surely be remembered. Some great lines, 'thr airport of ideas flying blowing flames', terrific stuff.
Very beautiful poem.Great values fearlessly expressed