Then I Cried Comments

really heart touching poem- But this time when I see the same old man selling again the faulty balances, and killing the principles of natural justice, ...... and when I lost control on my tears, then I cried! excellent expression

Seeing the injustice and corruption, the pollution and decadence of the times we live, there is reason for us to cry more for the growing generation and the generations yet to come! A thoughtful write!

Brilliantly penned and well crafted write. Loved reading this very touching.write. 10++++++and to my Poem List and the Poet to my Poet List.

What a wonderful piece of work. I was teary eyed when I read this poem. So touching. Very heartfelt write. The injustices of society have deep wounds mostly inflicted on the poor and weak men. But when this wounds are on our family members especially children, we will go down to our knees and pray. and cry that their fate will be changed and be spared from the vicious cycle of injustjce.

A nation where there is no justice is nat a nation.

It is a great philosophical write on injustice with the picture of past and present society.10

I too mourn for my descendants more so than for myself.

double faced exposed with all honesty/meaningful piece