Then He Cried Comments
When he left his mother and the doctor spanked his hide
In that delivery room he then first cried,
But, that cry that he uttered so proudly and loud
Was a proclamation to all, that he'll make his mother proud.
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Though in 2018, but I say still CONGRATULATIONS now being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day. Most deserving, dear Randy.
A heart touching poem and so very sensitive. TOP Marks for this amazing poem.
A poignant rendition elegantly embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. An insightful work of art written with conviction.
Thank everyone for their words, I am in Japan now, for about another week or so, my heart is still breaking after the loss of my mother, Once again, thank you everyone one for reading and commenting on my poem. Randy
Dear Randy, though years have passed, but the great sadness about your mother's death will stay, mine is like your dear Mother, we will never forget, though she is dead. Thank you so much for this lovely poem, I become sad too, since my mother was like yours.
A grateful tribute to a mother who nurtures a man's inner strength during his formative years. Thanks for this poetic masterpiece.
You sketch a close bond between mother and son: the mother could well be a single parent, as the father looks to be absent. It is a very good motive to bring honour and pride to your mother-and your father too, if he is there. A top-notch poem in crafted quatrains.
Mr. McClave, congratulations on your poem of the day.. Jame McLain
The love from his mother! ! Mother and child. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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As a young boy he and his mother walked hand in hand She taught him that one day alone he must make his stand, So, in defeat he would not ever give up, - - - -a fine mother poem.... praising th e mother and her innocent and building love...... which influences him a s a man... a fine poem.. thanky ou dear poet. tony
Yeah, mother is the backbone of a home. Deserved to be poem of the day. Congrats.
Very sensational poem. Excellently crafted. Congrats for being the member's PoD. Thanks for sharing X
A touching poem. And then she cried. Well done Randy. Congrats on Poem of the Day.
a emotionally charged poem of the love of a wonderful mother? ..........well written Randy
Very touching and inspiring indeed.....Mc Clave........very outstanding.........10
A poem that shows a mother's influence to be stronger than realised, in the life of a young man. Very well-written, and a deserved pick for Poem of the Day!
I just recently loss my mother, and my mother was the greatest influence on myself.
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Poem worded in great Brilliance! Once again 5 Stars. Thank you so much for sharing.