Monday, May 6, 2013

Then Comes The Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

When the the sun goes down and the day is done
Some battles are lost and others have been won
The toils of the day has gotten the best of you
Ready for another chance to start your life anew
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Patricia Grantham
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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 05 August 2013

A good nights sleep is a blessing. Sleep is important for life, so is the night. Nicely developed.

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Valsa George 18 July 2013

After a weary day comes the night, blessing us with rest and sleep, that we get out of our bed fresh and energetic to take up the challenges of everyday! Sleep is the balm for tired minds! A sleepless night is enervating, but a night of sound sleep is invigorating! Enjoyed this great write! !

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Louis Rams 08 June 2013

then came the night and a cool night breeze as it put my mind and soul completely at ease

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Louis Rams 08 June 2013

then came the night and my mind was put at ease, as I felt the cool night breeze it was a tingling sensation that entered my mind and soul, leaving me relaxed and completely whole.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 28 May 2013

I understand this very well. If you have time try Sleep My Love.Thanks!

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Kavya . 23 May 2013

v nice poem..yes sleep is essential n plays a vital role to rejuvenate yourself to spring into action the next day!

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Paul Brookes 16 May 2013

I know its value suffering from insomnia. Great poem Thanks for sharing BB : O)

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Valerie Dohren 09 May 2013

A good night's sleep makes all the difference to how we feel. A well written poem Patricia.

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Buxton Shippy 09 May 2013

A thoughtful poem about contemporary life that gives one hope.

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Sekharan Pookkat 09 May 2013

Night comes, not Quickly or slowly But the pace within our mind Blows quickly as sun goes west

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Patricia Grantham

Patricia Grantham

Moncks Corner, South Carolina
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