Saturday, July 22, 2023

Then And Now Comments

Rating: 5.0

Previously I used to love spacious home;
Now I prefer small spaces,
Small corners, small cubicles,
Small circles of friends,
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Khairul Ahsan
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Rebecca Navarre 27 July 2023

As we grow older less can bring more peace to our hearts and minds! .. Definite Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 27 July 2023

Beautiful thoughts, closer friends and smaller treasures, fewer treasures, can become oh, so precious! ..

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Bharati Nayak 26 July 2023

Absolutely love this poem.How do our interest and attitude change with age!

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Bri Edwards 24 July 2023

five stars *****

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Bri Edwards 24 July 2023

Best wishes. bri : )

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Bri Edwards 24 July 2023

(cont.) ...Though a 'peaceful end' (of life I think you mean) is usually desired by 'sane' people, you DO say 'let things go as they would'. You can't always have it both ways. : (

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Bri Edwards 24 July 2023

So, you are really getting 'old', as many of us do? ? I do my best to shovel into my mouth what is put in front of me by my wife; I refer to FOOD. Bye for now, but.....(cont.)

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Bri Edwards 24 July 2023

IF YOU WOULD LIKE HELP WITH 'voluntary dispossession' I may be of help. Are you trying to rid yourself lf cash, gold, rubies, diamonds, classic cars? ? ? Message me! ! ! ;)

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Bri Edwards 24 July 2023

dispossess dĭs″pə-zĕs′ transitive verb To deprive (another) of the possession or occupancy of something, such as real property.

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Bri Edwards 24 July 2023

(cont.) but did you MEAN 'dispossession'? I think you did, though you may be misunderstood. [see the definttion I'm about to send] (cont)

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Bri Edwards 24 July 2023

5 stars. I THINK you are a pretty bright fellow and can figure out how to 'dispossess.' ** quite easily. (cont.)

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Bri Edwards 24 July 2023

Kairhul, Is this well-done piece truly 'from your 'heart'/mind/soul/'whatever'? ? ? ? Are you seeking refuge in Canada now? Or are you laughing at us gullible readers, as you gulp HUGE meals 5 times daily? ? ? bri : )

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Sylvia Frances Chan 22 July 2023

Very sad tone has this poem, this was created when you were feeling that old? BUT you are still young at heart, so this poem will be for a later stage in your life. Brilliantly narrated, Khairul Sir! TOP Marks!

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Khairul Ahsan 25 July 2023

Love your kind comment, Sylvia, and appreciate it greatly.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 July 2023

The poet now finds pleasure in small things. His quest for ultimate peace is reflected in the last line. A sober poem!

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Khairul Ahsan 25 July 2023

@Dr Dillip K Swain, thank you very much, appreciate your kind comment.

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Sandra Feldman 22 July 2023

Sad but so true, vry well written too.

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Khairul Ahsan 25 July 2023

@Sandra Feldman, thank you very much. I am glad to have the first comment from you, an inspiring one.

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