Sunday, September 29, 2013

Then And Now Comments

Rating: 5.0

A while back I said I had no friends
Looking on today it's everyone

Back then saying hi was a struggle, a great feat
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Liliana EL.
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Chinedu Dike 18 December 2019

A concise and insightful verse written in persuasive expressions with artistic brilliance. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Vlad Mutuleanu 04 November 2013

This takes me back to my first day of high school when I didn`t know anybody, but now we have some great memories. Thank You!

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Princess Lilypad 29 September 2013

Cool portrayal of metamorphosis. Nicely created, a real identifiable piece. I came out of the dark as well.

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