Tuesday, June 14, 2011

Them...Selves Comments

Rating: 5.0

Those who have distanced 'themselves',
From the ones who spoke truth.
And embarrassed those distanced,
Who remain sustaining delusions...
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 14 June 2011

Incredibly well. Very strong sentiments. Great imagery. Fine poetics. I rated it 10/10. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1.

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