Wednesday, March 19, 2008
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she fluttered her eyes
he licked his lips
she giggled to herself
he grabbed his groin
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jasmine margetson
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Barry Van Allen
21 March 2008
Jasmine, Well, a familliar story anyhow, there is a lot of truth going on there. B.V.A.
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Blaine Mccanless
20 March 2008
thats....funny. in my opinion at least. i like the flow of it too
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7/30/2025 4:22:58 AM # 1.0.0
its sort of good. But I won't take that away from you. I like how you made it seem that the girl is perfect like the boy.