๐—•๐—ฒ๐—ฎ๐—ฐ๐—ผ๐—ป ๐—ผ๐—ณ ๐—›๐—ผ๐—ฝ๐—ฒ Poem by The Jhondelion

๐—•๐—ฒ๐—ฎ๐—ฐ๐—ผ๐—ป ๐—ผ๐—ณ ๐—›๐—ผ๐—ฝ๐—ฒ

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In a world where we feel forsaken and abandoned,
A barren land bleaked with loneliness, forgotten, forlorn
A life so hopeless and full of desolation.
A whole generation plagued by an epidemic called depression.

An illness that took the lives of many.
Yet still misunderstood, dismissed as laziness aplenty.
Loving parents lose daughters and sons,
Still no cure, incomprehensable not even one can understands.

They've scoured books, devoured dictionaries, seeking words to describe how they really feel,
Yet none can mend a soul like them, too broken to heal, too shattered to fix it still.

But then you came, a beacon so bright,
on this dim and narrow path I called life,
A glimmer of hope in a world so dark, where it all seems filled with wrath and strife.

Be strong and make sure to guard your light,
Growing it ever more intense โ€”impairing a sight,
Let it shine brighter than any stars and sun,
Help them light up their way till the darkness around them are gone.
For souls that dwells in void like mine,
I cherished the warmth it gives and provides,
In a world not built for us to live, rather just merely for us to survive.

Yet remain cautious of those who'd dim your glow,
Leaving you cold, it's unkind โ€” I know.
But keep your flames burning with passion,
Nurture it, share it wisely like a precious ration,
For your light is a beacon of hope,
Guiding those lost in darkness, away from ending their lives hanging on a rope.

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POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is inspired by all the people in my life whom I dearly love and adoreโ€”my friends, family, colleagues, and even strangers who stand beside me and millions of others suffering from mental illnesses. Their understanding, kindness, and unwavering support make this often difficult life bearable. They are my beacons of hope. Mental health struggles are often misunderstood, and those who battle these challenges are frequently met with judgment rather than compassion. This poem aims to shed light on the depth of these struggles and the importance of empathy. To everyone who offers a listening ear, a kind word, or a comforting presence, know that your actions ripple through the darkness, bringing warmth and light. This piece is a reminder that while the world can seem desolate and unkind, the light within each of us can guide others through their darkest moments. Together, we can create a world where no one feels alone in their suffering. Thank you for being the light that helps others find their way. P.S. Always remember that it is not that expensive to be KIND โค๏ธ (" ๐—ฃ๐—น๐—ฎ๐—ด๐—ถ๐—ฎ๐—ฟ๐—ถ๐˜€๐—บ" โ€ผ๏ธ ๐š’๐šœ ๐šŠ ๐šœ๐šŽ๐š›๐š’๐š˜๐šž๐šœ ๐š˜๐š๐š๐šŽ๐š—๐šœ๐šŽ ๐š’๐š— ๐šŠ๐šŒ๐šŠ๐š๐šŽ๐š–๐š’๐šŒ ๐š๐š’๐šŽ๐š•๐š. ๐™ฟ๐š•๐šŽ๐šŠ๐šœ๐šŽ ๐šŠ๐šœ๐š” ๐š—๐š’๐šŒ๐šŽ๐š•๐šข ๐š’๐š ๐šข๐š˜๐šž ๐š ๐šŠ๐š—๐š—๐šŠ ๐šž๐šœ๐šŽ ๐š–๐šข ๐šŠ๐š›๐š. ๐™ฟ๐š›๐š˜๐š™๐šŽ๐š› ๐šŒ๐š›๐šŽ๐š๐š’๐š to me is ๐š‘๐š’๐š๐š‘๐š•๐šข ๐šŠ๐š™๐š™๐š›๐šŽ๐šŒ๐š’๐šŠ๐š๐šŽ๐š ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป) (แดพสฐแต’แต—แต’ โฟแต’แต— แตโฑโฟแต‰, แถœสณแต‰แตˆโฑแต—หข แต—แต’ แต—สฐแต‰ สณโฑแตสฐแต—แถ แต˜หก แต’สทโฟแต‰สณ)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Patrick 11 January 2025

As a person who has had major depressive episodes, from a family in which depression is common, I emphasize alot with this work. Such a stellar poem you capture it so well. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem

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The Jhondelion 14 January 2025

Kevin, I deeply appreciate your words. Knowing this poem resonates with someone who's faced depression means so much. It's a tough journey, and I'm honored it spoke to you. Thank you for sharing your connectionโ€”it inspires me to keep writing with compassion and hope.

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Sandra Feldman 11 January 2025

Excellent poem! Full of kindness, hope and shining generous good light. Keep up the good work, the star of kindness are watching and bless you

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The Jhondelion 14 January 2025

Sandra, your kind words truly moved me. I'm so glad the hope and light in this poem reached youโ€”it's exactly what I wanted to share. Your encouragement inspires me to keep writing and spreading positivity. Thank you for your support and for shining your own light!

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