𝑰 𝑭𝑰𝑵𝑨𝑳𝑳𝒀 𝑳𝑬𝑻 𝑴𝒀 𝑫𝑬𝑴𝑶𝑵𝑺 𝑾𝑰𝑵 - 𝖴𝗇𝖯𝗋𝗈𝗌𝖾𝗇 𝖵𝖾𝗋𝗌𝗂𝗈𝗇 Poem by The Jhondelion

𝑰 𝑭𝑰𝑵𝑨𝑳𝑳𝒀 𝑳𝑬𝑻 𝑴𝒀 𝑫𝑬𝑴𝑶𝑵𝑺 𝑾𝑰𝑵 - 𝖴𝗇𝖯𝗋𝗈𝗌𝖾𝗇 𝖵𝖾𝗋𝗌𝗂𝗈𝗇

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I finally let my demons win,
They whisper like giants, patience so thin.
In harbored of darkness I conceded my fight,
I'll no longer actively seek for the light.

My soul starts reclusing, hoping to be unborn.
Thieving shadows, my hopes they scorned.
Emotions raw, exposing myself naked bare,
A fatal step in despair's seductive entrapping lair.

A heart once ablaze, killing in one air blow.
With each pulse, I let the sorrow grow.
No armor left to guard my core,
I welcome Satan or whatever he has in store.

In the dim glow of candlelight, I stand,
Clutching the remnants of who I am.
A ritual of despair begins,
Binding me in the demons' hymn.

Chanting words I scarcely know,
I let the darkness freely flow.
An offering of my spirit's core,
A pact sealed in the silence's roar.

A dagger's edge against my skin,
The bloodied ink, my soul's chagrin.
In this ceremony, I find release,
Anointing wounds, composing this piece.

I scream, I cry, in boundless silence,
This battleground abnegating solace.
But in surrender, there's a peace,
A promise that pain shall soon cease.

I now let my demons take their place,
In the hollow of my heart's embrace.
No fight, no struggle, no facade,
Just my demons sharing a drop of my blood.

𝑰 𝑭𝑰𝑵𝑨𝑳𝑳𝒀 𝑳𝑬𝑻 𝑴𝒀 𝑫𝑬𝑴𝑶𝑵𝑺 𝑾𝑰𝑵 - 𝖴𝗇𝖯𝗋𝗈𝗌𝖾𝗇 𝖵𝖾𝗋𝗌𝗂𝗈𝗇
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
UnProsen(derived from the word 'Unfrozen') - Directly means turning 'Prose' to 'Poetry'. This version serves as the 'short version' of my original prose 'I Finally Let My Demons Win'. Though some may still consider this as extensive, I can no longer shorten this without taking too much from the original. I'll be posting the Prose version soon! Thanks! Plagiarism Notice: This poem is an original work by TheJhonDeLion. It has been submitted for plagiarism checks to ensure authenticity. Any resemblance to other works is purely coincidental. If you find any similar content elsewhere, please notify me immediately. (I do not own the image used for this poetry, Credits to the real owner.)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Wlodarski 26 February 2025

This soul-searching poem hits you full force in the gut! And awakens the heart! Whenever confronting demons of any sort, please surround yourself with The Light.

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Kevin Patrick 24 February 2025

We all have demons my friend... they are always there in everyone of us. Most people dont want to admit them, or they hide, but you have the courage to write them and bare yourself. Thank you my friend this is stellar work!

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Brooke Renwick 18 January 2025

As long as you don't hurt anyone.

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