Friday, May 1, 2009

Their World, Not Ours Comments

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Their World, Not Ours (free verse)

Watching the doves and chickadees
From my patio,
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David Whalen
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Dr Antony Theodore 17 February 2019

Leaving nothing disturbed in that place while taking away only stolen memories To savor later on Pleasurable contraband? Yes and no. very fine poem, insight. facts of life and experiences.. tony

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Stephanie Dower 01 May 2009

How very true, a truly beautiful poem! Insightful and thought provoking. Thank you so much for sharing.

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David Whalen

David Whalen

Covington Kentucky
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