Thursday, July 26, 2012

Their Sky Was Calm A Day Comments

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Sitting on the lovely green grass and looking at the blue _white sky
Watching the birds which had lots of mysteries and secrets in their hearts
They were bringing news of the future, the nasty future of that place
But they just see the beautiful birds...For God's sake …They didn't see the blooded face
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Ellias Anderson Jr.
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Ellias Anderson Jr. 31 July 2012

thanks dear dude. you know, i was on hurry for writing down this poem.

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Sina Farajzadeh 30 July 2012

Well, good ideas. But I hope this wouldn't annoy you dude, please pay attention to the spelling (the wolves take care of the cute sheep) (fishes and sheeps is not ok, the plural form of them is fish and sheep) But the story was good, specially use of was a calm day.

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Captain Cur 26 July 2012

Dark Bombs falling on all of us. This is an excellent poem with rich detail, savagery, sadness and pain.

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Ellias Anderson Jr.

Ellias Anderson Jr.

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