Beneath the heights of their skies
Flying along the tracks of floating clouds wild
My kite flies not caring for
My words of caution ever.
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Kite really as our fate.Very deep and unique poem.jk
A very different and deep poem of life which inspired me to think my own way... thank you so much for that inspiration Dinesh ji!
Hold fast to the thread of your kite! Let it fly aloft, inspite of the wind being adverse and the sky hostile. Wonderful imagination! I see in this, the agility and strength of a stallion, galloping away to some far away well charted destination! Excellent write! !
Greatly inspired poem Dinesh - a flight of fancy. Well done.
a beautiful poem..very engrossing.I feel like reading over and over again
Imagination at its best. I believe this poem can be interpretted more than two ways and with your magical hands what not is possible? I wish you all the success while exploring the turbulant sky, and am least worried of you letting go of that thread. For sure, this must be once in a life time chance and you will not let it go sir! Bring me a lightning bolt will you?
My kite of dreams flying high in the sky though the control was in my hand but the natures strong winds and thundering threat to my fragile control. Now kite flying to unknown direction and am to flying along with it........................Beautiful poem. Loved reading it.
My kite flies in their sky with thread in my hand. Nice image. We hang on to the thread of life.
I don't know how to fly on my own but his faith on me lifts up every time to the height beyond skies..........Wonderful poem.10+++++