Sunday, December 29, 2013

Their Sky And My Kite Comments

Rating: 5.0

Beneath the heights of their skies
Flying along the tracks of floating clouds wild
My kite flies not caring for
My words of caution ever.
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M D Dinesh Nair
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M Asim Nehal 04 October 2015

I don't know how to fly on my own but his faith on me lifts up every time to the height beyond skies..........Wonderful poem.10+++++

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Jayachandran Chakrapany 12 January 2014

Kite really as our fate.Very deep and unique poem.jk

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Shahzia Batool 01 January 2014

A very different and deep poem of life which inspired me to think my own way... thank you so much for that inspiration Dinesh ji!

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Valsa George 31 December 2013

Hold fast to the thread of your kite! Let it fly aloft, inspite of the wind being adverse and the sky hostile. Wonderful imagination! I see in this, the agility and strength of a stallion, galloping away to some far away well charted destination! Excellent write! !

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Valerie Dohren 30 December 2013

Greatly inspired poem Dinesh - a flight of fancy. Well done.

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Rubab Atwal 30 December 2013

a beautiful poem..very engrossing.I feel like reading over and over again

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Aswath Raman 29 December 2013

Imagination at its best. I believe this poem can be interpretted more than two ways and with your magical hands what not is possible? I wish you all the success while exploring the turbulant sky, and am least worried of you letting go of that thread. For sure, this must be once in a life time chance and you will not let it go sir! Bring me a lightning bolt will you?

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Geetha Jayakumar 29 December 2013

My kite of dreams flying high in the sky though the control was in my hand but the natures strong winds and thundering threat to my fragile control. Now kite flying to unknown direction and am to flying along with it........................Beautiful poem. Loved reading it.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 29 December 2013

My kite flies in their sky with thread in my hand. Nice image. We hang on to the thread of life.

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