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Thank you for kind words of appreciation and advice.

The limerick packs laughs anatomical Into space that is quite economical. But the good ones I've seen So seldom are clean And the clean ones so seldom are comical.[3 A limerick looks like this. You have written a nice poem although it is not a limerick. So, thanks for the poem. I was attracted to see how an Indian limerick would be. Don't mind. Regards. Subhas

Please look up the formatting for a limerick.

The sky looks like the most radiant set of jewellery with clusters of diamond sprinkles, very fine imagination and poetic expressions.. thank u dear poetess. tony

Dear Mantrana, such a great poem....10++++++