Their Knives Come Out For You Poem by Shaun Cronick

Their Knives Come Out For You

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When I submit a new poem,
There's a fear I simply dread.
Will people smile and enjoy it,
Or kidnap me and take my head.

It's always a tricky balancing act,
When you write something fresh and new.
How will people simply accept it,
Or do their knives come out for you.

Sunday, October 20, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: writing
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Practicing Poetess 20 October 2019

First off, it sounds as though you are writing for the wrong audience. If you desire a visceral response, you must write from your own heart, because what is genuine and sincere will touch people. Secondly, I understand that some poets are given to exaggeration, but I highly doubt that knives would come out for you, unless perhaps you blasphemed the Queen! Write to please yourself. If you are satisfied with your work, that is all that truly matters.

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Shaun Cronick 23 October 2019

Yes. Spot on I concur. It's a bit like picking your feet in Ploughkeepsie. Thanks again.

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Kingsley Egbukole 20 October 2019

I express my thought in writing and leave people to their opinions. Thanks for sharing. Please kindly check my poems HOPE and THE BEAUTY OF DEATH. Kingsley Egbukole

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Shaun Cronick 23 October 2019

No. I will not.

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