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Beautiful poem dear poet...........\\\\\

today i plan to put your poem into my/our MARCH 2018 showcase, on my PH site, in my list of 'poems'. let me know if you object. i give poets their 'due' but no money! !

i did not catch the misspelling at first! ! ! ! Fantastic. unless you are just being playful/creative. i like it, but i think it is a typo. i don't want other readers to be learning 'wrong' spelling! bri :)

but the fact that you misuse it's (sometimes) causes me to be unsure in a couple of places whether you mean it is (it's) or belonging to it (its) . its breaks the general rule of making a possessive using an apostrophe. it is (it's) a common mistake of writers. bri :)

They oft travail** To a hidden land.....................** travail..................verb 1. engage in painful or laborious effort. perhaps you meant: traverse.......verb.......1. travel across or through. ? ? ? ? ? i like the rhyming and the story. to MyPoemList. welcome back? to PH. (to be continued) .....

Wonderful observatory poem is presented on children and how they escape really. This is much too fantastic to understand. Wonderful poem is shared.10