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Along the earthen pavement by the side of the lake
Walks some absent minded souls;
Some self absorbed,
Some hand in hand with soulmates,
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@Lyn Paul, Thanks for reading the poem and sharing your thoughts on it. Much inspired.
@Hazel Durham, Thank you so much fo picking up my humble poem to your 'favourite poems' list! Appreciate your kind and generous comment.
@Aarzoo Mehek, Thanks for the thoughtful appreciation. Much inspired by the comment. I also appreciate the kind comments that you left on some of my other poems recently.
In the evening of life, such places are sought after by people who don't have much responsibilities at hand and who come out to have a fresh breath of air. Also to meet birds of a feather and exchange some pleasantries! You have created a beautiful and pleasant ambiance!
A beautiful style of writing and a great title, I could vividly picture the scene so atmospheric like for a moment time has stood still. Love this poem it is going on my favourite poem list!
I see below u have said u want to compose better poetry then two suggestions read more poety comment on as many and the EDIT this ENGLISH IS not your mother tongue so it seems
nice scenario no different to Canada in winter of one's life nice poetry yes tis it is have u read my moms smiles and mothersday today if not please do you may today
Thanks for your comment, @The Poet Poet. I haven't read your poem 'Mom's Smiles' but i have read 'The Greatest Hindi Poet Kumarmani Mahakul Sir' and commented on it.
An interesting write both insightful and there is sometimes wonder in silence great work. Thank you for your kind review of yesterday on my poem Prodigal Son? appreciated but back to your endeavour a 10 +++ I would say
@Paul Brookes, Thank you, dear poet, for being the first reader to comment on this poem. Your appreciation will inspire me to write better poetry. Thanks for your generous rating of my poem.
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@Valsa George, You have perfectly described the theme of the poem. Much inspired by your thoughtful comment, thank you.