Saturday, October 18, 2008

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Arctic smiles
Atlantic smiles
Pacific smiles
Himalaya sounds hurray!
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sarwar chowdhury
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Gabriela Nunez 11 August 2009

Absolutely beautiful! I love the stanza about the essence of devotion and love.

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Crystle Jones 22 July 2009

well, i know im smiling. yet again, you amaze me! this one is so touching. and im sure there are quite a few people out there that can really relate to it. it gives hope for alot of people. to know there is still true love out there. very inspiring

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 28 November 2008

purity of love is in the devotion that shows.....and that which is unexpressed also....thanks for a sweet poem.....long live their love...

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Saxyn Schaffer 20 November 2008

i love your poetry. not only is it about history and present and the future but you make it so it is about you and your love. i really like it. xxsaxynxx

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Min Sia 13 November 2008

Poets will really smile reading this wonderful inspiring poem! How lovely and heartwarming!

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Uriah Hamilton 26 October 2008

What a lovely tale it does make poets smile.

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Rakhi Jayashankar 26 October 2008

amazing and unbelievable this is y we say love is blind

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Drake Kinkaid 24 October 2008

Very good You use a colorful way of thinking Clever

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Ben Gieske 24 October 2008

I like your format and delivery. Lot's of life and spirit. 'The essence of quintessence knows, ' is a line I like best. I agree that 1 + 1 = 1 (A unifying love and something new that never existed before) . There is another way to look at it too. 1+1 = 3 or even later on 4 or more.

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Brianna Wilshusen 23 October 2008

The repition of the the words makes it flow together in a way that I like. Nice job

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Tia Maria 23 October 2008

Oh... this has made my day, thank you :) Love & faith go hand in hand When two hearts connect and make a stand There is no distance that can separate The man who finds his perfect mate Tia

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 23 October 2008

Wonderful story of lovers meeting... Andrew 10

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Indira Babbellapati 23 October 2008

long live their affaire de coeur!

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Aliyah Al-Sharji 22 October 2008

waaw the story is so sweet and amazing, the poem is just wow i really liked it

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Saint Cynosure 21 October 2008

Has I view these words I to am in love...with your poetry! ! ! GOD bless, Saint.

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Mamta Agarwal 21 October 2008

love knows no barriers, i understand this poem as my son met his beloved on the net. she is Dutch, and he has gone there to study and be with her.lovely composition Sarwar, you are a diehard romantic. its so refreshing in this world of cynics.10++. quite innovative presentation. thanks Mamta i was out of town, hence the delay.

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Wanelisa Albert 21 October 2008

nice poem Wanelisa Albert

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Melvina Germain 21 October 2008

A beautiful love story for sure, your author's note is very hard to believe, but definitely a symbol of true love. Excellent write, I thoroughly enjoyed the read and enjoyed the way it was presented.

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Priya Arora 21 October 2008

Beautifuly written...Love the way you jot down the thoughts..

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Tom Balch 21 October 2008

Well done Sawar, a lovely love story 10 / 10 regards Tom

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sarwar chowdhury

sarwar chowdhury

Origin- Bangladesh, Living abroad.
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