Friday, June 6, 2014

Thee Tree Comments

Rating: 3.5

I lay atop a grassy hillside
Not under, but beside a beautiful oak
Only so the sun can still reach my face
Sunshine pierces my wavering eyes
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Christian Hudak
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Colleen Courtney 08 June 2014

Great poem! Love the buildup as a sweet and beautiful write and then that stinging zinger of a last line! Brilliant!

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