Friday, November 27, 2009

Theater Stage Comments

Rating: 2.9

In morn –
We crawl
We walk in four
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Catrina Heart
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Catrina, this is just an incredible piece, still reverbrates within my heart after I was done reading! Truly beautiful! ! Thank you!

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 06 January 2010

nicely penned ma'am catrina!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 November 2009

Life rolls and spins ‘Has a perpetual spinning wheel Of birth and death Alike the river and streams, surging Hugging the open sea Alike the waves rushing, it is how the life goes onandwe oplay our part in ral life..so vivid descriptionandi admirethetalent of poetess so great innature.. tksfor sharingit with me....10 read mine great circus....

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Tsira Goge 27 November 2009

Alike the waves rushing, To and fro to the expectant sand Grazing the shore, ‘till the next one Even tide mingle with autumn Wherein cockcrow giggle with spring Halcyon days rave in swim suit And winter skiing the cold calendar turns ......................................................... Catrina, Very beautiful poem with deep passages..10... Tsira

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Afzal Shauq 27 November 2009

Each turn, age mounting up Flourishing petals of mind Before sundown, wrinkles the skin Exhausting bones until ones demise Curtains close, so our life’s rebirth Awaiting a new play at the theater stage yes very true you said here.. we are all even drama artists and playing our role in theatre and performing as per our capability... your approach here is very realistic and I agree with your say..you expressed well and in very sweet flow of poetic way..well done 10/10

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Daniel Kempson 27 November 2009

So good Catrina, think you have brought it home to us all 10 Daniel

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Ramesh T A 27 November 2009

Life drama goes on in a circle.....! Nice depiction of it in poetry!

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Eyan Desir 27 November 2009

Poetic and fine words just fell from your head onto paper Good job Poetess...

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Carol Gall 27 November 2009

love this catrina so open i can almost age with it 10

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