Saturday, September 3, 2016

Theater In Bachok Comments

Rating: 5.0

This morning I went to a theater show in Bachok
I got comfortably seated on the first and only row
with a glass of freshly squeezed watermelon
naturally sweetened to perfection.
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Aufie Zophy
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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 24 September 2016

It is of course an imagery. See the wonderful way a poet makes heart felt things out of only imaginary things. Quite enjoyable and congrats for being the PoD.

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Kim Barney 24 September 2016

Enjoyed it very much, and it does qualify as a poem, a very good one. Congrats on poem of the day.

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Savita Tyagi 24 September 2016

Lovely poem Hansveer, This theater offers us boundless joy and so does your poem. Congratulations for the poem of the day selection.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 24 September 2016

Heartiest Congratulations on the poet of the Day as also for the fantastic flight of imagery that has conceptualized such a nice poem.

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Unwritten Soul 24 September 2016

Congrats Hans for being choosen one here, Now the theater is reopened.. I am delighted for it :)

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Lyn Paul 24 September 2016

What a magical show this would have been. Imagery I wish I could view. A choir of invisible doves...... simply beautiful.

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Clarence Prince 24 September 2016

Careless what its called I've enjoyed reading it! Thanks for sharing!

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Akhtar Jawad 24 September 2016

A beautiful poem, wonderful imagination nicely penned. penned

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Bharati Nayak 24 September 2016

When my drink was finished, I was allowed to go on stage and have a private chat with many actors They spoke a strange language but perhaps they understood my heartfelt praise. The dance with the nature - - - - -Wonderful write ! !

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 September 2016

Private chat! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kelly Kurt 24 September 2016

You write from a place where writing should come from. Keep doing so!

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Unwritten Soul 04 September 2016

Wonderful Theater, so green and natural in act...the are awesome...and free ticket :) lovely write dear

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Hans Vr 09 September 2016

Many thanks, Soul

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Paul Brookes 03 September 2016

such a gret piece of narrative poetry I ewlly ejoyed the cast great write

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Hans Vr 09 September 2016

Many thanks, Paul for the lovely comment

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