This morning I went to a theater show in Bachok
I got comfortably seated on the first and only row
with a glass of freshly squeezed watermelon
naturally sweetened to perfection.
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Enjoyed it very much, and it does qualify as a poem, a very good one. Congrats on poem of the day.
Lovely poem Hansveer, This theater offers us boundless joy and so does your poem. Congratulations for the poem of the day selection.
Heartiest Congratulations on the poet of the Day as also for the fantastic flight of imagery that has conceptualized such a nice poem.
Congrats Hans for being choosen one here, Now the theater is reopened.. I am delighted for it :)
What a magical show this would have been. Imagery I wish I could view. A choir of invisible doves...... simply beautiful.
Careless what its called I've enjoyed reading it! Thanks for sharing!
A beautiful poem, wonderful imagination nicely penned. penned
When my drink was finished, I was allowed to go on stage and have a private chat with many actors They spoke a strange language but perhaps they understood my heartfelt praise. The dance with the nature - - - - -Wonderful write ! !
You write from a place where writing should come from. Keep doing so!
Wonderful Theater, so green and natural in act...the are awesome...and free ticket :) lovely write dear
such a gret piece of narrative poetry I ewlly ejoyed the cast great write
It is of course an imagery. See the wonderful way a poet makes heart felt things out of only imaginary things. Quite enjoyable and congrats for being the PoD.