Standing on a hill of hope
Where swords rest and green boughs sway
There rich fruits of knowledge beckon
As upward we make our way
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A true freedom poem with a spirit of patriotism. A salute to your wordings great writer!
I really like the way you have written this, our path in life
The imagery in your poems is beautiful. They are all quite good, a pleasure to read
A wonderful poem expressing the hopes and aspirations of a young person. Your wording is very good, and I really like the rhyme and rhythm in this piece. Good work! kate
This poem is fantastic i am speechless yet again your poems has great wording
Beautiful poem keep that in your heart forever and let no one tell you You Can't Live- Laugh- Love and become all you can be! May you always see the bright morning sun!