Monday, September 3, 2012

The Young Sentinel Comments

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A tale is told of a young sentinel
Who crevassed the ice and into it, fell
And landed in meadows of white and green
With winged horses in a gold-coloured stream.
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Mosi Mustapha Gomina
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Kaila George 10 September 2012

Wow I like this....this is simply poetic to the eye...do you know how to use stanza's...hmmm...it would be intresting to see in true stanza formation.

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