The Young Fire Comments

'naked flame, you're dancing higher tasting life with such desire' mmmm...a wonderful metaphor for living life to the full, making your mark and being acknowledged. Strong images that paint a lasting picture. Love this...Justine

Great descriptive write; really brings fire to 'life' for me. Excellent poem! Thanks, Esther

I could stare at a fire for hours..........I've never written a poem about a fire though. A great topic. I'm not a fire-bug but, there's something hypnotic about them. Very nice poem. :) Sincerely, Mary

Short but wonderful. A lovely explanation of fire. Thank you for the enjoyment of reading it. Love Ernestine XXX