Friday, July 14, 2006

The Young Cowboy Comments

Rating: 2.2

I found it hard to believe
he was an innocent young boy
because of the way he walked
toward me with a forward thrust of hips
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Scarlett Treat
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Alison Cassidy 20 July 2006

Scarlett, I know just what you mean. You have painted a very convincing portrait of this young man. I can see him.. and you. (I assume it's based on experience) . From one sixty-something to another...it's just the same inside. love, Allie Catte

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Esther Leclerc 14 July 2006

But his glance raked over me/with almost physical impact - great lines there, Scarlett. And there ain't one thang wrong with a heapin' helpin' o' Cowboy imagery - I'm right there, girl! ! !

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Jerry Hughes 14 July 2006

Redboid, I'm not going to get analytical about this poem. It comes over as a 'what if' bit of fun, nothing more nothing less...

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YOU'RE A DIRTY OLD WOMAN! Well, I told you what you asked me to....you kinky young lassie... I Love the piece big time.Your well 'POSITIONED' heh-heh, Imagework along with a tight& crisp structure, makes this Cowgirl Poet, look mighty fine & well crafted.! But Scarlett, my sweet, next time forget the POKE, and steal theHORSE.We can saddle it up to a Manhattan Carriage...YOU GOTTA START THINKIN' OUT O' TH' BOX, MY DEAR...LOL'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK/FJR

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Ernestine Northover 14 July 2006

Great story wonderfully described, and a wonderful picture it conjured up. Very, very nice indeed. Love Ernestine XXX

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R H 14 July 2006

Great narrative Scarlett - was he a young Clint Eastwood lookalike? ? Justine

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Alice Vedral Rivera 14 July 2006

naughty......... avr

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