Thursday, September 4, 2014

The Young Are Here Comments

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The young have come and stepped into our world
Replacing us with zealous liveliness
As tender flower buds are quickly unfurled
Replacing faded flowers with loveliness
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Elia Michael
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 05 September 2014

Wow wow that's aging up in gracefulness and not grumpy grunting against the youth. To let them take the olden ones places like u put in creative metaphor for the blooming buds to replace the withered flower, wow! A unique poem so kudos again. Pls do review my latest poem too.

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Elia Michael

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