Sunday, November 30, 2008

The Young And The Passionate Comments

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We live in no place we desire,
there's no figure deserves to be admired.
Us, whose hearts are dyed with fire,
from this world, want to retire.
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Caroline Weeks 06 December 2008

instead of changing the world, let us first change our hearts. I love this line - so true. This poem feels like youth and passion to me... Caroline

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I like the ending a lot you wrote this very well.... Krista

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