Crying in the pallid night
Crying in a dreary sleep
Crying torrid shades of ember
For the washed out faded days
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crying the pain of heart shedding as tears; oh the tears- stream of remembrance!
Wishes don't accept objection. beautiful piece of poem.Well done! SYLVA-ONYEMA
A beautifully poignant piece- - I especially love the first stanza and, well, the whole rest of the poem! Very deftly accomplished. Bravo!
Like floating perfume Is love in the air When for another, You really care. And so is your poem, A lovely delight, For all to read, By day or by night.
Of truthful words remain a blissful dream. Heartiest Congrats on member poet of the Day.
Hi Julie, First, Congratulations on getting selected Poet of the Day. You deserve it for this beautiful poem. This poem exuding confidence and positive energy. Very evocative and encouraging. Enjoyed reading. Confidence grows into doctrine Great! ! a 100++
Confidence grows into doctrine That seems a great line, a line to note!
Even in crying in emotional feeling I remember you oh dear God. God is all in all to rule over life. By his grace confidence grows into doctrine. This is very beautiful poem shared here. Congratulations! ...10
Beautiful Lines. Nicely expressed. Confidence grows into doctrine With unimpaired withdrawal signs Particularity nice verse.. Thank you for sharing Poet! ! and congratulations for being the Poet of the day for the Poem of the day! !
This is an excellent song! I actually sang it aloud even before I learnt it was a song. I want a copy of it? ? ?
Love your style, Julie. Great poem. Especially the lines: Crying torrid shades of ember/For the washed out faded days. Julie, have you considered transforming this poem into a song? I think it would make a good one. Congrats on Poem Of The Day. Well deserved.
brilliant work here..! love how this feels as I read? so many good lines. :)