Sunday, January 22, 2017

The You That I Remember Comments

Rating: 4.9

Crying in the pallid night
Crying in a dreary sleep
Crying torrid shades of ember
For the washed out faded days
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Julie Smith
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Sarah Shahzad 11 January 2020

brilliant work here..! love how this feels as I read? so many good lines. :)

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Mahtab Bangalee 14 October 2019

crying the pain of heart shedding as tears; oh the tears- stream of remembrance!

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Sylvaonyema Uba 07 April 2018

Wishes don't accept objection. beautiful piece of poem.Well done! SYLVA-ONYEMA

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Seamus O Brian 04 January 2018

A beautifully poignant piece- - I especially love the first stanza and, well, the whole rest of the poem! Very deftly accomplished. Bravo!

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Sandra Feldman 30 March 2017

Like floating perfume Is love in the air When for another, You really care. And so is your poem, A lovely delight, For all to read, By day or by night.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 29 March 2017

Of truthful words remain a blissful dream. Heartiest Congrats on member poet of the Day.

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Unnikrishnan E S 29 March 2017

Hi Julie, First, Congratulations on getting selected Poet of the Day. You deserve it for this beautiful poem. This poem exuding confidence and positive energy. Very evocative and encouraging. Enjoyed reading. Confidence grows into doctrine Great! ! a 100++

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Clarence Prince 29 March 2017

Confidence grows into doctrine That seems a great line, a line to note!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 March 2017

Even in crying in emotional feeling I remember you oh dear God. God is all in all to rule over life. By his grace confidence grows into doctrine. This is very beautiful poem shared here. Congratulations! ...10

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Siddartha Montik 29 March 2017

Beautiful Lines. Nicely expressed. Confidence grows into doctrine With unimpaired withdrawal signs Particularity nice verse.. Thank you for sharing Poet! ! and congratulations for being the Poet of the day for the Poem of the day! !

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Tom Allport 29 March 2017

a sorrowful poem of many tears? ..........beautifully written.

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Christina Simmons 29 March 2017

This is an excellent song! I actually sang it aloud even before I learnt it was a song. I want a copy of it? ? ?

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 March 2017

I remember! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 29 March 2017

Supreme sign..... congrats on being selected....

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Richard Wlodarski 29 March 2017

Love your style, Julie. Great poem. Especially the lines: Crying torrid shades of ember/For the washed out faded days. Julie, have you considered transforming this poem into a song? I think it would make a good one. Congrats on Poem Of The Day. Well deserved.

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